General problems with EII written work

First and foremost: you must proof-read. To catch sentence level errors, proof-read aloud.

If you get distracted by your own beautifully-forged outline, read the last sentence aloud first, and then the second last and so on.

Major problems:

1. No proof-reading
2. No outline, or contradictory outline
3. Sentence fragments
4. Run-on sentences
5. Multiple parenthetical phrases
6. Comma splices
7. Misuse of commas
8. Repetitive words
9. Tense choice problem

Minor problems:

1. Spell out small numbers, eg "seven" not 7. Large numbers eg "$10,000", are fine.
2. Comma after prepositional phrase
3. Its versus it's
4. There versus their